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I liked this poem. I just wished you capitalized it's one of my pet peeves. Lower-case letters at the beginning of sentences can be disconcerting, but if you look at ...

Fair points. This wasn't a serious attempt at a 'good poem' (as if bad poetry can actually exist), so I wasn't expecting much praise. This was also experimental in its ...

I, like many people, prefer "come in useful" to "come in handy". I don't know many people who say "handy". Perhaps it's an American/British differences sort of thing (most of ...

Thanks for your review. I know I tend to dump information - I try not to, but sometimes I just can't help myself!

"Civilised" and "saviour" are British variations of their American equivalents. But thank you for noticing my the mistakes that were mistakes.

Thank you for your reviews. You imply earlier that they are dark and evil creatures. White is a color of purity. You make them sound like Angels. The contrast is ...

Thanks for your reviews, I'll see what I can do about improving this - I have to agree that there is too much dialogue, but by the time I realised ...

Thanks God. Sorry I changed the ending like that, I could change it back if necessary. Alternatively, I could add the whole horror has just begun thing somewhere alongside the ...

As according to Jiggity's comments, I've made a few changes to this. I've also changed the ending significantly, I think it's a vast improvement on the original ending, but I'd ...

Thank you for your comments, I will go over it later and improve it.

Having read Demetri Saint Randrac's critique, I've come to the conclusion that most if not all of my own criticisms were inappropriate. I was not reading with an open enough ...

Thanks for informing me that you've revised this. As I said last time, this is really good. I don't have much to complain about, but the line "I was shattered ...

Thanks guys! "You" is supposed to refer to our ancient ancestors, but it is also addressing one particular megalomaniac. I won't say who, because I want to give readers the ...

Thanks for your reviews. I can assure you that I was fully aware that not a lot happened here, but more exciting stuff is to come (and it will become ...

I'd say I prefer the first one for including the whole world, but the second one sounds better. I don't know, these are a bit short to judge.